This was cool. You get some cred for it being your "first complete animation". I liked how fluid it was. Props man.
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TRIED TO GET API TO WORK BUT, i CAN'T seem to figure it out soooooo no ad revenue.. *sniff*
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I'm pretty dang happy with it! you may need to change your adobe premissions for the links to work but, other then that there SHOULD be no issues! please donate it'll motavate me to do more! ^.^ did a lot of experimental stuff on this one. I "kind of" wanna tweek the caveman scene more tell me what you think! if, you have any suggestions and if you don't like it tell me why and if you have legit things to say then I'll "reupload" this on a later date with the changes you specify I send the links if you "choose" to add me on any of the above site cause honestly.. "I'm lonely.." ;(
keolamation responds:
thanks. :)
slings came before arrows. Cool movie though.
keolamation responds:
and they shot rocks.. I'm drawing the "projectiles" not the launch devices.. -.0
The animation was good but it could be better.
My suggestions:
1. I didn't like the text style ( Too big , or could have positioned above their heads.)
2. It needs a few additional frames for the guy's turning.
3. Drop some frames for the guy throwing the rock to apply the effect of ease in and ease out.
Dude this is really kewl :D Short and to the point with a very powerful message that makes ya think how important it is to focus more on positive stuff, I believe that could change the world its the negative people who don't "get it" that keep the world "destructive"
Ah the beauty of mankind's weaponry.
Amazing isn't it?