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Newgrounds has a video player now! Hellz yeah! I've been making shorts for a while now but I've been lazy about uploading becasue converting my videos to Flash makes me pull my hair out.
But no more! I'm back baby!
hank hills son
Eh, skyrim isnt THAT bad on glitches. Never ran into any of those glitches myself. Also, if you find that lack of facial expressions a problem, you can only ask yourself "Why do I stare at people's faces on games to see their expressions?".
The art is pretty nice to look at besides the backgrounds. You seem to put a lot of detail into your characters yet next to none in your backgrounds and believe me it's noticeable. You also tend to use the same hand models for all of your characters yet they are some of the strangest looking hands I've ever seen. The animation just feels cheap and lazy with all the tweens but at least you lip synced well, although I do think your mouths look very strange too.
Despite the art being rather nice on the characters your character models just scream "tracing" to me. The body's just look way to much like traced photos, if this isn't what you did then fine but it sure looks like it. I'm not sure whether it's because you don't have much artistic ability or it's just because you want to shovel cartoons out consistently but the faces are the most detailed things in all of your cartoons yet everything else tends to look pretty darn awful. It's a shame too because judging from those faces you are able to draw to some degree.
The voice acting in the video was rather nice, the quality was good and you seem to emote well. The writing was okay too and got a few smiles from me.
Overall I think although the animation is very limited it was tweened half decently but it's still not very great to look at. The art needs improvements basically everywhere except the faces and I just feel you could do a lot better than this. The mouths are ugly and very strange looking in my opinion but maybe that's just me. Your writing is just fine but I feel you need to focus on the artistic aspect a little more because it's very distracting.
wall glitch xD
Yeah, I liked Oblivion as well.
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