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It's a quick one!
I had to go back and watch this....cuz this is when it started
Strange but i still like it.
I will get this started by saying this was not awful infact it was pretty decent, it had some odd moments but had some decent moments aswell, but in the end it all made sense and made for an interesting flash here, so i like this submission even if it was somewhat differant. And so as the flash plays on this was keeping me interested there was actually alot going on with some interesting and nifty things happening, I was not too familuar with everything so was confused at first, but soon enough got use to it, so it was not that bad. The characters were interesting, some more use of "COLOR" would be nice, It did seem to lack some "ACTION" maybe thats something you can work more on later, There was some ok jokes but i thought that some of the jokes and humor in this could have been better and more direct and too the point it would make it more funny. And well there you have it, it was an alright flash could have some adjustments but thats for later, but for the mostpart this was still an interesting and somewhat entertaining submission, there are a few more suggestions but thats for later aswell, anyways good job here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And well for some improvments or fixes as some say, i dont know with this one, there are a few things i noticed thatcould be better, so ill do my best to suggest some positive suggestions, so look into them and try and make this even better then you already have, This flash Lacked action so maybe some scenes with more action going on, This could use some better jokes and humor, regardless good luck.
I got a small chuckle, but i love the animation. your animation is distinct just like sexual-labster and gonzzossm. I can tell if its yours or someone elses. A good animater has there own style of animating, its not like you throw some colors in and say "FUCKING BEUTIFUL". 5/5 easy.
Great video, this shit never goes stale.
Lol that piece of shit was yotam
A rumor at an elementary school spirals out of control.
Have you ever thought Destiny was a little bit... fabulous?
A short about parties and socializing
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