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Please enjoy and give constructive feedback. Also, just so you know, the noise in the background is meant to be there, it's a sound file from Portal 2!
overall I really didn't laugh my ass off at it, but it got a lil chuckle, as stated before your vid has quality animation but you could've taken it much farther. Over all it was a nice flash 3/5 for you good sir, (and dont let it get you down IMDB has given 9.2/10 for the highest rated movie of all time so a 6/10 aint so bad)
Thankyou so much for the feedback!:))
I do tihnk it would have been good if it was longer, yet still, good.
I enjoyed it. Of course it could use more anything (take for instance there are plenty of animations out there with NO story but a long animation and vice a versa) I do think you should expand it but don't think longer is always better. Need the quality which it seems you will have no problem doing. Thumbs up.
Thank you for your kind words, its nice to have some that gives constructive feedback without swearing every where. So thank you! :)
Animation was fairly good could use more story
I like the animation, now show me a full animation.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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