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In this debut flash, Fox and his crew tackle the struggles of the lylat system. Friends are made, lost, and mutilated. Love is in the air, and wolf's a bit of a dick.
Great flash. Enjoyed it from start to finish, including the closing song.
Although it is obvious that you take some inspiration from Egoraptor, your flash is unique and I'm glad you didn't change anything in order to force yourself and your work to be obviously different from what you envisaged for sake of not being egoraptor.
Looking forward to future works.
That was fucking hilarious!
At first, I thought that this was going to be insubstantial and reeking of dated cash-in. Upon repeated viewing, however, I was in hysterics. It isn't common to see a Star Fox spoof on NG, and this one felt like a legit parody from Roger Van Der Weide. In addition, I agree with what Spazkid has said except for the Family Guy being "perfectly well-crafted" part.
When it comes to the animation, it may be badly-drawn, but what you did with those bad drawings was pretty crafty. I definitely see the Metal Gear Awesome similarities, but you took the good things about it and applied it in a very distinct way. Of course, you have stiff competition from Rambojoe in the badly-drawn, but creatively animated department. I can see you getting better and better as time goes on if you study the right material. As for the sound, I like the music used as it fit every situation quite well, but the voice acting takes the cake. This is some of the best voice acting I've heard in a while. Finally, the content was well-written considering how underused the subject is. While the barrel roll joke is old shit, I was laughing hysterically though the whole thing. It takes a delicate hand to make a style of humor that has been overplayed funny these days; anyone else would have done so poorly. For that occasion, I have added this cartoon to my favorites list.
What I liked:
-Great voice acting
-Clever use of the whole badly drawn on purpose style.
What I didn't like:
-The fact that people have accused you of ripping off two renowned cartoonists.
Overall: Brojack, how would you like a nine from me? (4.5/5)
That was fucking briliant :D
I really enjoyed the video, and even though many aspects of it were extremely similar to egoraptor's work, it was good for someone new to flash. I think after a bit more of your work hits the portal your style will either diversify a bit, or people will get passed the similarities. Like you say, comedic style and timing isn't something you can easily change, and you shouldn't force it for any other work you come to publish. Good luck with your next flash.
whats the name of the song at the end? download link? haha
Welcome to the end of the world
Wouldn'tyou just like to... leave conflict.
What happened to Cortex's airship?
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