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In this debut flash, Fox and his crew tackle the struggles of the lylat system. Friends are made, lost, and mutilated. Love is in the air, and wolf's a bit of a dick.
Better than Egoraptor XD Love the timing of the language.
I thought this was pretty good, made me laugh. It seems like with the other reviews that becuase it isnt Egoraptor, they hate it. Ahhh little do they know that some of the best Awesome videos didnt always come from him. Kudos to you for making me laugh fine sir, I hope to see your art improve over time.
Sketchy animation, crappy voice acting, low sound quality and volume, well-written, good overall scenic effect, bad art, sometimes unable to understand what's being said or what's happening
Advice: Look I don't even fucking know. I'm drunk. You want actually useful advice, don't fucking look for it on Newgrounds. There will be some reviewers that do so properly, but not a whole fucking lot. Even if you look for those proper reviews, you're going to be subject to a shit-ton of confirmation bias. The movie was fucking awesome but you need to fix shit up and make things a little more consistent.
It's funny but the animation needs a lot of work. Good energy and pace. It would probably help you to get a couple of friends to do some of the voices.... Maybe a background tune. I guess the message is to work harder on animating and movie making. Your jokes and script are fine.
I thought it was pretty funny, just make sure your volume levels are the same next time.
HBO starts targeting children!
What place? Earth!
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