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Apr 11, 2012 | 1:45 PM EDT

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A strange nightmare in the middle of the night

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MistyEntertainmentMistyEntertainment

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 11, 2012

I understand what you were going for with this flash. The only problem is, it didn't work very well because of the way you executed it. This could work very well as a storyboard or an animatic, and the only complaints I have for this one is the way in which you chose to execute it.

For instance, it wasn't clear what that first shot you drew was. When he was sleeping, you could've had a dark background and have it fade to black for effect and to give off a "nightmarish" vibe. You should've extended the part with him falling, that's one of the most important shots in something like this.

Him falling could've been done better. When you fall, you start off kinda slow and get faster and faster; you accelerate. Also, instead of showing him open his eyes, you should've timed it so at the right time, it just cut to his eyes, and then show "FIN" for a short period of time.

Just some suggestions. 3/5


dkparadox responds:

Thank you for this response, I should go back and work more on this. Kinda get it finished. Idk i felt good about it until I hit the submit button. Thanks again.


BedtimeDrugzBedtimeDrugz

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars April 11, 2012

nothing happens... the animation is not bad, but is need to go somewhere.

i guess what i'm saying is that, that is not much of a nightmare :(



cameyandstuff123cameyandstuff123

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars April 11, 2012

how is that a nightmare the man/figure falls for a little bit ends up back into his bed and wakes up i had hope when the arms came out of the bed but apart from that nothing like a nightmare



skerry2006ajskerry2006aj

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 11, 2012

fun... and interesting...