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Hey, so i seen alot of really skinny girls and asked them to eat a sammage and they said "ew food" :| so... heres my response...
Music is: http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=U0qy-VMrZgM
I need to learn how to do a loading bar, so if white screen, just wait about 10 mins.
progressivly i will get better at animation.
also better voice actors :| this one seemed like she did not want to screem.
A side from what you already said you need to do in your description, you need to put more effort into the delivery of your joke. This could of been funnier if you built it up a bit more like having the stomach rumble a bit and then she stagger around and then suddenly just expand into a fatty.
Just work on your delivery of the joke and the overall quality and you'll be better for it!
:> thanks for the help. 002 will deliver of a joke :>
I'm givin you 2 stars for effort. I would invest in a new microphone cause it sounded like if she did scream it would blow the speakers. Also don't be afraid to do stuff yourself. Sometimes your voice is the best cause you know exactly what to go for.
Other than that keep goin dude don't let me make you think you shouldn't do anymore, just need a bit more practice and then i bet you'll be golden.
Thanks for the 2 stars.
it was not my mic that i need a new, its the voice actors :> my next videos will have better voice actors lol.
A short film about a park bench
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