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my first game, I would appreciate some constructive criticism.
I sense potential in you
say your name ten times say your mom name five times say your crashes three times
Not bad. Could use some work though. Maybe a little mini-game for defeating the monster. But never the less, it was pretty good.
For a first game, like others have mentioned, is, although very simple, still at least getting started with some good concepts. I like these kind of puzzle games, almost remind me of 'choose your own adventure' books i used to read, where going down a certain path would lead to death.
More elaborate puzzles, detailed environments and perhaps a back-story and character content (who am i playing? Why are they in this dungeon (?) with lots of doors?) All this would help improve any future additions to this game. I hope you continue on with it!
Shoot swords, teleport and don't mess with the turtles
Join Marko Sharko on his first detective case!
Jump through a bustling cat city collecting fish for points.
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