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It's one of my first videos and please don't expect too much. I'm still learning, but I tried my best.
I'm from Poland so I had to add subtitles in English.
Let me know what you think. I hope you enjoy it.
Your animation is well enough but but the jokes were lacking and the video's direction was straightforward and predictable.
I honestly enjoyed your video, It's great that you're first trying an animated video and it's (to compare to most other videos submitted) quite a tiny gem, that only needs polishing to really shine!
I'm not an animator type person so all I can say are my opinions.
Your drawings \ sketches could need some smoothing , perhaps when using the draw program or whatever you use, use the line feature or some straight edge type thing.
say for example your person, the person's arms seemed uneven, maybe when you draw one arm, just copy it, and mirror it's image so that it seems you have two completely identical arms!
Great as a first video! I liked the animation portion, but I kept feeling his arms wern't blocky enough. I think the subtitles should have been a diffrent color because it kept being seen though steve's shirt which made the subtitles a bit hard to read. Over all: Good job!
A fine first effort! You also did well with the translation and the audio (the body crash was a bit loud and you might have added one or two more sound effects). I've never played Minecraft, but seen enough parodies here to know you were right on the mark!
If it was a little longer, more detailed in script and animation, this would get a much higher rating (despite the beaten to death subject matter).
Kosciusko would be mad proud of your fort building skills!
Not bad, the animation is certainly very nice, and the voice acting is not as bad as you think. There is definetly room for improvement, but you show good potential. Keep trying, and you'll master it.
A short film about a park bench
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