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Mar 27, 2012 | 12:12 PM EDT

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READ BEFORE YOU WRITE A COMMENT
THE ENGLISH IN THIS COMIC IS NOT VERY PROFFESIONAL THAT IS IT MIGHT NOT BE PROPER IN FEW PLACES
PLEASE DO NOT SEND ANY ABUSE REGARDING IT AND IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT NO ONE IS STOPING YOU FROM NOT READING IT
AND ALSO IF YOU GOT ANY PROBLEM IN NEXT AND PREVIOUS BUTTON THEN TRY RELOADING IT
SCREEN WILL BE BLANK WHILE LOADING...
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Robot Astron
A story about a robot and a group of contractors
who find that that robot is not just a fighter robot but also a person from their past
how can that be?
what is going on?
what's that robot exactly?
well you don't have to wait for long part 2 which is coming soon..
but first let me take a break..
*phew* i didn't know that making such a basic comic can be so stressful o_____o
well i am a beginner i guess that's why...

Reviews


mandogmandog

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 27, 2012

Something I have not seen before, quite my style.


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EyeTraumaEyeTrauma

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 27, 2012

It was all right and had a decent pace. What I suggest is perhaps voice overs or if you cannot get that, try putting some music in your comics. Like light music. Not elevator music, but light, soft calm music. I should also add (I'm aware this is put in the area about the video) that you get someone who is at a higher skill level writing wise to check over your writing. That should improve it a bit more.


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anarchy3398anarchy3398

Rated 2 / 5 stars March 27, 2012

It isn't really even a game, but it's not too bad, but it could use some music.



iksoftukrecordsiksoftukrecords

Rated 2 / 5 stars March 27, 2012

Not really a game, Got alittle boring, 2/5



konacorkykonacorky

Rated 2 / 5 stars March 27, 2012

Spelling/Grammar Errors


ADreamyHead responds:

and what i said in THE DESCRIPTION?! READ before you WRITE!