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Song is from: Lazytown
This is my 2nd animation! Be nice in the comments, but don't hesitate so show "constructive criticism"
Actually the song is from the childrens TV show 'Lazytown'. Think about it, does " LOL, Limewire" really sound like a show to you? "LOL, Limewire" is a meme. The joke is that limewire is a file sharing program and so the users are "pirates". You really shouldn't credit a meme, especially a not very good one.
As others have said the animation in this video seemed pretty underdeveloped. And it looked like you were shooting for a variation on the meme (except with gingers). I think you should consider working on your art separately from your animations. Try starting by animating simple things and movements and when you are ready working towards a full flash (which would then be what you submit). It is ok if it is a short. But this (what you have submitted) feels unfinished and underdeveloped.
Practice some more and try again. Good luck
Thanks for your comments! This was my 2nd animation, on the 2nd day I learned. (I seriously spent HOURS watching tutorials!) I wanted to make a short animation to practice my skills with. Yes, this animation is very undeveloped, thank you for making that clear! It actually only took a few hours to make this. I will try again, and I will get better and make better animations, don't worry!
sorry mate, it was pretty crappy. sure, there are animations much worse, but the idea is just not new at all, copied from a much better version XD
It was pretty bad, to be honest ;) I realize the idea isn't worse, but I think I'll start with more "original" animations as I get better.
this was one of the worst things i have ever seen....
i cannot be nice... you had no animation,if you get me... everything you have done was a 10 seconds, writting + pictures put on black background, and then some other pictures that looked like dancing... a picture, put in a mirror, is not moving... it gives you the impression, but it is not moving. you were just flipping a picture over a song for kids.
i do not consider this thing to be an animation... i consider it to be lack of interest, and work..
seriously, if you are using flash, try a little, more, because, you can make very simple animations, very easy... for example, a project could take you even weeks before completion, but if when it will be completed, it will look good, you wiould feel happier....
Well, I'd consider it to be an animation. Things were moving. And, it did not take 10 seconds, it took plenty of hours. It's hard when it's your 2nd day of learning, and you have school ahead of you.. (I am in 7th grade). I'll take the things you did not like, and keep them in my brain for things not to do again! And thanks for the words of wisdom at the end!
I can tell this was hastily made. The background was drab and very un-pirate. Maybe add like a pirate ship or the ocean. More detail should be added to the characters as well. On a good note, the audio is crystal clear!
Thank you for the (+) positives and (-) negatives on this flash! I'll work very hard!
could be worse.
i forget where the song is from, but do give it more credit. look up the name and author(s)
the animation is okay, and it is short.
with practice, improvements will be made.
Thanks for the review! This song is actually a short version from the Kids Television show "Lazytown" I believe.
A short film about a park bench
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