Nice job! Of course you can clean it up, why point out the obvious? Keep practicing and keep 'em coming!

Maybe if it was drawn better. And had better sound quality. And didn't look like a shit i took.

Hum, in my opinion random stuff are not funny, and the idea behind the movie is not enoght to make a movie about it. Next time try to pick a subject that can be interesting, original, new or all above idk. Half a star for you.

Entirely uninteresting.