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Mar 23, 2012 | 5:42 PM EDT

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This little short is indented to represent online relationships and getting sucked into them. It's also supposed to be scary in some instance.



Rated 4 / 5 stars March 23, 2012

that was...creepy as hell but i suppose thats what you were going for and for that i commend you. Also the art style was very beneficial to the mood as well.

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Rated 3 / 5 stars March 23, 2012

This video was interesing at first, then I saw the ending and I just didn't even know....that computers eat people. Also, to short.


Rated 2 / 5 stars March 23, 2012

Nice animation but the background ruined it
Like a lot of animations, this has potential to be proper entertainment. You included enough movement so you know what it takes for smooth movement but wasting that potential away on a on a storyline where a PC/MAC randomly eats a guy to symbolize a computer dominating your life isn't worth working on (I think that's what you meant with the symbolism). First write a draft, refine that draft into a better mini script and then you start working on it. Slaving away on an animation that isn't worth making is obviously a bad choice. Plan your project, good luck and enjoy the power of creativity

DylaneggsProductions responds:

I understand what you mean about writting a story line, but wasted potential is a little harsh for an animation that is not ment to really have a storyline. It's just symbolism, but for my next animation I will use a script. Thanks for the advice.


Rated 2 / 5 stars March 23, 2012

Better sound please.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 23, 2012

...Now what the...