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Mar 23, 2012 | 5:32 PM EDT

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Wanted to play around with a different style so I put this together

Animated, Voiced and Written by Oscar Galt

Song - Mrs.Robinson by Simon & Garfunkel

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad. Simply done, but still hilarious. :)

tvgravy responds:

thank you


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It was kinda good i like the idea and mabye you could make a longer video with a little more story behind it but it wasnt very funny as "comedy" would imply and the "nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooo" at the end was waaaaaaaaay too long, i know you were going for comedic effect but it was overdone

tvgravy responds:

thanks for your feedback


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

I felt awkward watching it
Not enough effort is put into it. Ok, let me put it in perspective from the people watching it. Clunky animation, boring to watch...unless it's detailed which this one isn't, more fps or picture detail. Awkward voice, stings doesn't it? Practice your voice acting as if you were talking naturally to someone else because your words feel forced. Impersonating stand-up comedy also helps but whether we like it or not some people have to practice voice acting where others do it naturally. Awkward long no at the end, don't do that to your audience. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
See this as constructive criticism and creatively work on the things I just mentioned, all entertainers start out horribly. Overall Ratings

Animation: Clunky
Voice: Dull
Script: Awkward
Art: Rushed

tvgravy responds:

ok thanks man