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Wanted to play around with a different style so I put this together
Animated, Voiced and Written by Oscar Galt
Song - Mrs.Robinson by Simon & Garfunkel
Deadly Fighter 2! Coming Soon........
Not bad. Simply done, but still hilarious. :)
It was kinda good i like the idea and mabye you could make a longer video with a little more story behind it but it wasnt very funny as "comedy" would imply and the "nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooo" at the end was waaaaaaaaay too long, i know you were going for comedic effect but it was overdone
thanks for your feedback
I felt awkward watching it
Not enough effort is put into it. Ok, let me put it in perspective from the people watching it. Clunky animation, boring to watch...unless it's detailed which this one isn't, more fps or picture detail. Awkward voice, stings doesn't it? Practice your voice acting as if you were talking naturally to someone else because your words feel forced. Impersonating stand-up comedy also helps but whether we like it or not some people have to practice voice acting where others do it naturally. Awkward long no at the end, don't do that to your audience. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
See this as constructive criticism and creatively work on the things I just mentioned, all entertainers start out horribly. Overall Ratings
ok thanks man
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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