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Mar 19, 2012 | 1:53 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place March 20, 2012

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Hey, everyone!

This took me about a week, maybe a little longer. It's pretty short, but I really like how it came out.

I'd love some feedback on how to improve! Thanks :)



Rated 2 / 5 stars

Wasnt really funny at all. Your drawing is good.


Rated 2 / 5 stars

kinda obvious u put little effort in this, no music besides bad whistling, short flash with no meaning, its tired obviously, and wasnt funny. Try being more creative and use more energy.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

I agree with Spazkid but...

My main problem here is the style.
It's just a copy n' paste of...Oney and Pebble. And it suck because it didn't look personnal, it's just look like forced humor and shit. Also the voicework was kinda low, I mean you can't really do a funny voice voice, more annoying than funny.

Because yeah, adding a crappy music and making stupid sound with you mouth doesn't make it funny. Maybe if you had a little more of your humor and not "SpazOneyPebbleRaptor" humour it would be funnier.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Is this really what passes for humor now? Well I guess I shouldn't be surprised. Most of the people on this site are mentally retarded anyway so it would make sense that this is the kind of video that gets rated up.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

1st. - Get a better mic for future videos.
2nd. - Practice your voice acting.
3rd. - Try to be original the script for this is a lot like Egoraptor's Poke'Awesome

Hopefully this will help you out