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This took me about a week, maybe a little longer. It's pretty short, but I really like how it came out.
I'd love some feedback on how to improve! Thanks :)
The style's a rip-off of OneyG and everything just felt slow and boring.
Also, the whistling was just annoying.
However, I will give it an A for effort. It was clear you were trying to make it funny and the concept was a good idea.
I suggest you keep trying.
If you were going to borrow jokes from other Pokemon Flashes... you should have chosen ones that havent come out in the passed 6 months. Your jokes especially, but even your art... the flash in general are complete clones of other Pokemon Flashes on Newgrounds, that have been frontpaged. Recently? Is no one else seeing this? All of it.
it feels like you didn't even try.
reminds me a bit of Egorapter... only bad instead of good.
Wasnt really funny at all. Your drawing is good.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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