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This took me about a week, maybe a little longer. It's pretty short, but I really like how it came out.
I'd love some feedback on how to improve! Thanks :)
Very humerous and loved that Jenny beatdown in the beginning but yeah you should definitely improve the length time of it.
This feels somehow familiar. The animation was good, but the voice acting, sound effects and general feel weren't all that great. Keep at it.
Ive got to say you need to improve alot. For instance, Your lip syncing is quite possibly all over the place, like the mouths simply move all over the face and dont stay static and keep a simple patern, this would be fine if they didnt have so much detail with cheek bones and detailed stretch to the mouth. even if the cartoons all over the place if a symbol or Picture isnt moving, its quite noticeable and above all looks rushed.
Aside from that you should really work on your animation I do see alot of bounce effects and slowdown effects but you also must keep in consideration how strong a movement is to how soft one is. Bounce effects are good but doing them alot looks awkward sometimes motions dont get enough force behind them to cause a bounce effect and doing it just makes no sense all together. Always consider switching between slow down effects and bounce effects. AND ABOVE ANYTHING ELSE, you should work more on your style.
Should really practice anatomy and have a general Idea of how ideal body movements work.
its a good start though, you should just maybe limit the flood of content and work more the art and animation
Quality over Quantity.
Not bad, not bad at all.
I agree with what Defaulted said, and it's true: most flashes do try to impress with weird faces and random stuff going on. However, I just so happen to have a weakness for the over-the-top weird face, especially when it comes to shows like Flapjack and Adventure Time. The crudeness of it, however (like the man urinating and the "Ash is a Faggot" graffiti) was too much for me. But I'd like to see more from you, keep at it!
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