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This took me about a week, maybe a little longer. It's pretty short, but I really like how it came out.
I'd love some feedback on how to improve! Thanks :)
You need to define your style, and polish it. The first shot was cool, the rest of them... clearly needed more work... work that you can do so stop being lazy! :)
I think I've got a pretty clear style. I like how it turned out. And I wasn't being lazy ._.
If I chose to make this movie, why would I be lazy while making it?
I do have areas to improve in, but laziness is not the cause of my errors.
It was okay, the humor tho is kind of eh... Not everybody can be Egoraptor. Keep workin on it. Least favorite was the music. Other than that tho, good animation.
I'm not totally convinced by the voice acting, a bit too down-playing
Can't say that I really enjoyed it.
The animation is good and you seem to have made this with some effort, but I think that you could have made something more. Looks like every new flash tries to get high rating with weird faces and somewhat random stuff going on and your flash is pretty much the same. Maybe you could try making a bit more serious and longer battle that does have its funny moments, but with more thought put into them?
P.S. Background music sucked. And before someone says "You just don't get the joke", that doesn't make it any more enjoyable. Maybe the whole feel of this animation would have gone up with some amazing PokÃ©mon battle music?
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
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