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This took me about a week, maybe a little longer. It's pretty short, but I really like how it came out.
I'd love some feedback on how to improve! Thanks :)
Not bad, I like your animation style and the general concept. However, the voice-acting was, to put it bluntly, pretty bad. You need a better Mic, or just use a 'professional' VO. As for the animation, you should take more time on your lip-syncing. It's passable, but at times the mouth-flapping-loop is pretty bad. I'd like to see some original, non-parody work from you, I see a lot of potential!
god how i was dumb watching pokemon.
but nice flash animation,
kinda retarded, but okay.
Alright, I liked the drawings you did, the coloring also popped out and wasn't extremely dull, but I especially loved the animation here. Voices could have been much better, though, but most importantly, this shouldn't have ended so fast, I was pretty disappointed to find out it was only like 20 seconds long... also, I can see some (supposed) elements of Egoraptor and Oney in here (Egoraptor for the animation style, Oney for the music in the background). Also I have to say this really didn't make me laugh, except a little on the inside when I saw Pikachu's face at that one part.
Though I like what you do, I think you should go quality over quantity of your videos as opposed to vice versa, I'd love to see a longer video of yours...
But keep it up, definitely nothing bad.
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...Anyway, I got a good chuckle out of it. If you people want to bitch about the way it seems (cough, Scroler), then go check out the Under Judgement section. Because it's not like this is an art style, right?
While there is no central joke, or any epic plot, it's still a good view.
kinda obvious u put little effort in this, no music besides bad whistling, short flash with no meaning, its tired obviously, and wasnt funny. Try being more creative and use more energy.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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