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This took me about a week, maybe a little longer. It's pretty short, but I really like how it came out.
I'd love some feedback on how to improve! Thanks :)
how to improve? depends on whether you're going to continue making short funny ones like this.
Cos' the obvious answer you're inviting here is 'longer'. Also I see you went for disgusting/weird/pathetic looking characters for comedic impact, but if you started with decent designs which rapidly degenerate into something much less so, that would draw more attention to their character design.
good for a chuckle, ending was funny, maybe you could of made it more entertaining in the beginning
Love every moment of it
It was actually funny heh. reminds me of adventure time.
not too bad for a short. i found it mildly amusing. the animations werent bad.
ignore the people saying this is like egoraptors style. its not. the same people say that about like 80% of the flashes that get uploaded. >_>
Health Reminder 3: The Unfixable Thought Machine
This is oil story... The real trend of the world. How Tuk uses oil to solve his problems?
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