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Tails betrayed sonic, and now its up to ed edd and eddy to help sonicd, to defeat Tails.
My first video.
Uh... Uh... With the emergence of sprite videos, I see something, well bad... Just find a book called "Flash Animation for Teens" and learn how to animate from there.
As far as a proper review goes:
The screen is too small, and whatever you used to convert the file, because I'm assuming you simply converted a windows movie maker video file into a .swf, left a very revealing demo water mark.
There really wasn't any animation, just a collection of pictures that vaguely resembled the process. In fact aside from one sequence, the movie was about the Eds and Sonic talking.
Don't get me started on the story. I found it farfetched, lacking any sort of writing, but loads of character derailment. Why does Tails want to suddenly betray and harm Sonic? Why would Sonic's friends turn on him and team up with the guy whose obviously acting beyond himself? Why the Ed's of all characters?
Before you continue, or rather before you restart this, because it would need to restart, you need to brush up on the basics of storytelling and animation before you attempt to make story based flash here on Newgrounds.
Please consider learning about flash animation from what you know, there are plenty of tutorials out there on Youtube that will teach you how to animate sprites.
The screen is way too small, I can barely see anything. Also the demo message is most annoying. Not terrible for a first video, but definitely look into enlarging the screen, and also getting rid of the annoying demo text. The soundtrack you used was very nice in painting a certain image. To be honest that is what is carrying your video.
Where is part 2?
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
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