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Made using Adobe After Effects CS3 took around 2 hours to make.
just cause it looked sorta cool
I have absolutely no experience in After Effects, so I'll judge this like I'd just seen it at the beginning of a game or movie.
I'm not sure about moviegoers, but I absolutely hate it when logos take up too much time before I can play my games, especially when they're unskippable. So, the shorter, the better. Currently, it takes me less than a second to read Valvar1. It stays up for seven seconds, then slowly flies past the camera. At most, in my opinion, it should stay there for two seconds. That's long enough for your viewers (at least me) to get that this is a Valvar1 production.
To my knowledge, it's good design to have all of a logo's elements working together. The two lens flares that fly past initially--why not make them stick around for the shinies on the logo instead of zipping away into space? As it stands, they have no purpose; two completely new lens flares show up when they're gone.
Of course, I'm not a graphic designer and I'm relatively new to animation, so there are probably plenty of more professional opinions out there.
What you have here is nice. It's cool and quick.
But this is still a pointless submission. This is an intro to nothing. Please don't submit intros with nothing afterward. It defeats the purpose.
A story about finding your true calling.
Help me to help you
A young artist trapped in a boring job uses his imagination to escape from reality.
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