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After a lot of hard work, this is finally done.
I never want to draw another horse as long as I live.
I actually like how this turned out.
Feedback is appreciated.
ACTUAL feedback... on how to improve.
I'm sure I'm gonna get a lot of "you're copying hotdiggedydemon" or "your drawing style is too similar to egoraptor's"
It's just a My Little Pony parody... don't get too worked up about it.
**also if anyone knows how to get that youtube button to work, send me a message. It works in the .swf file on my pc, but it doesn't work online for some reason**
Don't worry twilight fluttershy likes you :3
This was a good cartoon and could have been really super funny, but the author comments kind of ruined it for me. They're all so whiny and annoying.
I appreciate the animation and voice work, although I don't know if that was the best choice of music.
I actually thought the syncing was pretty good, the animation as well. I just think the voice acting was a bit plain. Besides that, great job!
None of this reminded me of Egoraptor. It reminded me of psychicpebbles at the most. Having said that, I felt that it had potential to be something very funny, but it was awkward for me to watch. Awkward in a sense that, I knew where it was trying to go with the comedy, and I couldn't shake that feeling. You can improve on your "blur" techniques, which aren't TOO bad to begin with, your lip-syncing, and overall exaggeration of emotions and drawings. And really use your imagination/influences to come up with some hilarious shit. You're on the right track, I can tell. All those little details (Twilight spitting when she says "Spike", changing facial expressions, etc.) Just.. exaggerate more. Considering that's what you like in other animations.
Something you did with a camera transition bothered me. When Pinkie Pie was standing near Spike's dead body. You changed her position from the left side of the screen to the right, without a clear connection to that new perspective. It breaks the continuity a bit, and it's just something you should be aware of.
Voices were good quality, but Pinkie Pie and Twilight had no difference in tone, which took the funny away for me.
Leaving on a good note, I'll say that I liked Celestia's small bit towards the end. That was good, and I sincerely giggled from it because of the timing, specifically when she took a breath, made that fucking face, then continued laughing. That was funny. Hang on to that aspect. |
I hope this helps.
"Man, this horse is wack, it's got poo brain." - Some people that weren't just me, surely
But na, the animation was alright. Nothing amazing, nothing particularly bad. Same thing for the story, could've used a bit more originiality.
It's a decent piece, but not particularly memorable IMO. Sorry :/
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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