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Mar 10, 2012 | 7:21 AM EST

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cyberrepoliocyberrepolio

Rated 0 / 5 stars March 10, 2012

it got damn it WTF



storkman1000storkman1000

Rated 2 / 5 stars March 10, 2012

I liked the animation alot but the dialoge sounds like it was thought up in ten minutes. Take a little more time thinking of lines in the future.


tvgravy responds:

will do thanks


DarkenedSpaceDarkenedSpace

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 10, 2012

Hello Tvgravy!

I like your animations, you have a pretty good grasp of how voices should differ per character and the vision of scenes creating a specific emotion and impact, as well as unique humor. The animation was smooth, but there are a couple things that can be improved upon (with time of course). Just to note, I'm not a hater! I just like to be honest and provide ways in which you can improve. It looks like you created the scenes in paint, which is still fine! But in the future I would like to see you work on more sophisticated scenes creations with layers, shadows, fading, and color diffusion. I honestly am no professional in creating Flash animations, but I try my best to provide possible solutions. You may be able to use programs such as Adobe Photoshop. I know photoshop is pretty expensive, so here are a few alternatives that are free: Photoshop Express from Adobe, Pixia, or Inkscape. I'm sure there are other, do some Google searching! The last item I had was the introduction of a "Replay" button. I noticed that your animation only loop after they end. Work on an ending menu which includes a replay button, as well as a Facebook page, or even just a short "Thank You" paragraph. Anyways, thanks for your animation! I know Tvgravy can be the real gravy in the future!

Jesse-


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tvgravy responds:

Thanks for the constructive feedback man. This was just sort of a side animation but yeah we really do need to work on all of those things. Our animations that we are working on at the moment will be much, much better than this and hopefully we will have the buttons working. Cheers


Ian099814Ian099814

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 10, 2012

its not bad but its not good