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This was supposed to be part of .. something else.. but whatever.
I know its sucks, let it go :P
Not bad, but nothing that really wowed me to tell you the truth. I admit, this was animated well but the joke felt kind of... stale. It also felt kind of disjointed due to that out of place anime-ish/bard chorus part in the middle.
Maybe I'm having a bad day, but all these animations I've been checking out and rating have seemed to be awful.. So I apologize in advance. I rate completely fairly, and this is much better than the last three I watched and rated, but the point was still missing, I had no urge to laugh, it just wasn't very funny to me. For you second animation though, and just for practice.. VERY WELL DONE! Kudos for that, but the story was lacking, and the humor was as well.
Good stuff! My favorite part is when they were eating at the table when it pans down to show he's eating over Ulric's corpse! lol
Whoa, a Skyrim flash. Why didn't anyone else think of that?
Very well done. I do have some constructive criticism though. You have very strong artistic skill, especially with anime type characters. I think you need to work on your animations fluidity so it doesn't look as choppy. Also, the quality of the art varies throughout the animation. You go from very clean anime to a more toony and rough style often. I think you should work on maintaining the quality throughout the cartoon because a constantly changing style can lead people to believe you are "lazy" or just half assing the toon to get it posted. I really think you have great potential, you just need to take more time and focus on making very great quality toons :D.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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