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About one minute long. Please make a review if you can! :D
well i didn't think it was that bad, but it had a weird sense of humor xD and also sometimes bad drawn flashes makes it better, good work man ;)
Needs some improvement like less annoying sound and better annimation but other than that its a nice little parody, one other thing change the age rating to teen :)
I can't really make out what the voices are actually trying to say. Animation could be better, but I like that you've put effort into it.
The major hang-ups that I saw were the voice-acting and pacing of the plot. I could barely understand what the characters were saying. And then at some points the jokes were rushed while others stretched out too long. Work a bit on both and I think everyone will be impressed.
Sorry to say but this is bad only thing mildly funny was the Jessy thing.
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