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A first-time assassin fails to kill his target when he pulls out a wrong gun
nice your storyboarding was great along with the character designs, poses, and backgrounds! reminded me of Luis. Funny dialoge and well executed. the only gripe is this needed more inbetweens to be fluid! 7/10 4/5
It has potential. The voice acting was a little quiet and fuzzy but nothing wrong with it otherwise. The story was pretty cliche so I can appreciate that. The actual quality of the character and setting design was surprisingly well done, its just the animation which put me off a bit. I know it can't be easy to animate every frame with that much quality but its just something that I found slightly disappointing. It was fairly good overall and its clear this has potential so I would encourage you to continue trying to make animations and I'm sure the quality will increase over time! :D
The humor was a little flat in my opinion, but I thought the drawing style was really good and the narrative made sense. Work on the tiny details: 1) character voices could be cleaned up; 2) car's wheels only start rolling AFTER it stops. Good job, though.
its a little funny pretty good animation. looking forward to seeing future projects!
it was okay. I really liked the artwork I though it was fantastic but the animation itself was very choppy. I felt like I was watching a video as it buffered every second. It is hard and tedious to draw multiple frames, and it takes forever but in the long run the extra work is far worth it.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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