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this is an odd movie. Original idea from my friend "frapachinoguy"
so a quick animation of a penicl being shoved into a fruit
and zoomed in to look like an anus
and zoomed out to show its not
the artwork was shitty
the flash was shitty
Needs more work.
Hmm ok so this was kind of an old flas but i must say it still gave me a laugh, now a few things could have made this much better, for one, you should have made it longer. and with other stuff going on, it was over as soon as it started, the "VISUALS" were ok pretty basic, but again this flash was like five to ten seconds long and just needs more, the "JOKE" was amusing but could have had more content and more of a story in there, anyways nice job, so as suggested below and above, could use some more stuff as suggested, but it does have a funny little joke to go with it so for that you have a good idea, just neeeds more of the other stuff.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as above there just wasnt enough content, it started out as a good idea and a funny joke but needs more stuff going on, more jokes. longer scenes and am improved story to go with it.
not too great a gag, but you did ok with it visually. Sound though is kind of an essential in pretty much any flash, and the fact that there were no sfx at all really cut this one a bit short of it's potential.
--- Old joke
+++ I like the joke.
--- a pencil and peaches? Makes no sense. Was someone drawing on the peaches? Were those 2 peaches?
Other iterations of the joke deliberately make something vaguely normal look sexual. The bottom half of a pear, making for wonderful art. A couple of narrated iterations that I can't remember just now...
- Overly basic graphics
Amused and bewildered, in roughly equal measure.
Shadow Flare's Review
Note: I rate by today's standards despite the date the portal entry was submitted or the author's experience.
Graphics (2) - There wasn't that much that had been done...
Style (0) - It was a lame joke that didn't hold any style...
Sound (0) - No sound
Violence (0) - None.. I'm trying to keep my temper down..
Interactivity (0) - None..
Humor (0) - More annoyed than humored...
Overall (1) - I average the scores and round them up to give decent scores.. though this does deserve a 0...
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