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Feb 28, 2012 | 12:52 AM EST

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This is my second flash, and its not bad i think, except for some minor defects ( like 2 play buttons (Sorry about that but i couldn't figure out how to incorporate it smoothly ) ). The end is certainly a surprise, well, until you see it.



Rated 4 / 5 stars

A little slow, but watchable.

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Rated 4 / 5 stars

Eh. Animation is fluent and easy to understand, and the music goes well, but there isn't a very good story setup. I know that it's your second flash, and I haven't seen your first, but I'll say something now: you're already better than I am. I don't even know how to use Flash, which is why I mainly write reviews and blog posts. As far as beginner submissions go, this is really good. Four stars.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It is a bit slow paced, but good.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

It feels like stick animation. Look up tips on timing and spacing if you like to give it life to the thrill...

keno571 responds:

Alright, thanks for the advice


Rated 3 / 5 stars

I Mean it's no master piece! But honestly great effort good enought to watch.