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This is my second flash, and its not bad i think, except for some minor defects ( like 2 play buttons (Sorry about that but i couldn't figure out how to incorporate it smoothly ) ). The end is certainly a surprise, well, until you see it.
A little slow, but watchable.
Eh. Animation is fluent and easy to understand, and the music goes well, but there isn't a very good story setup. I know that it's your second flash, and I haven't seen your first, but I'll say something now: you're already better than I am. I don't even know how to use Flash, which is why I mainly write reviews and blog posts. As far as beginner submissions go, this is really good. Four stars.
It is a bit slow paced, but good.
It feels like stick animation. Look up tips on timing and spacing if you like to give it life to the thrill...
Alright, thanks for the advice
I Mean it's no master piece! But honestly great effort good enought to watch.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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