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Feb 27, 2012 | 6:51 PM EST

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um this is what i made



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this is so awesome


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This is far from good but I have seen your profile and its one of two submistions so obviusly this is just a start for you. As for content its just simple throw away jokes with simple art added to it. As I said you are just starting and you can clearly see.

If I had to give some feed back to you it would be to first work on the story or at least some better jokes. I would then add a reply button it was quite hard to review something this short with out having to open multiple tabs. Once you have worked on that I would then work on your animation/ audio.

I believe that you have taken the first steps in animating and just submitting something is a big step just the quality you have provided does not fit with NG. Just step back from submiting and work on your animation for a while.

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just no man just no.


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Not funny at all. No talent here either.