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That's a good demo.
Even though FluidAnims may be synonymous with stick fights, but what you had shows that you have potential. I bet that you'll just get better over time and not waste it like some people who won't be mentioned.
Graphics: It may be simple stickmen, but you animated those sticks like a pro! In addition, I also like your color selection and use of silhouette. Unfortunately, this isn't going to faze stick haters regardless of the effort that went into this.
Sound: Great job with the sound effects, and I really liked the background music you selected. Usually, these FluidAnims cartoons suffer from questionable music selections made during production. However, I think that you should have credited the song used in this. As for the voices, not bad and kudos for not putting in voice-filler dialogue.
Content: This is the only major problem this has, but I don't mean that in a bad way. On one hand, there have been so many stick fights made throughout the years that it's not even funny. On the other, your choreography and direction are excellent. As said before, I see a lot of potential from you.
-Great animation and colors
-Excellent choreography and direction
-Not very original, but still well-done.
Overall: Here's an eight from me and I think you should try learning constructive drawing. (4/5)
Wow, that's a pretty awesome review, thanks a lot for it, I'll take those words into account for my next one, and try to brainstorm a lil bit for ideas so they stand out more. And well, the song, it's from an old videogame, Prince of Persia Warrior Within, and it's even un named, so I can't possibly credit it :/
Haha nice man, badassery at its finest, great work!
Thanks man, I don't think this quite deserves more than a 4 like you gave me, so it's cool
A credit for a sigh? Hehe.
Anyway, looks good. Ya just need a finished product now.
Lol yeah, even though that guy is awesome and is voicing lots of badassery for an animation I'm working on
Loved it, it's the simple things like the handle of the sword being Gold that sticks out & makes you wanna see more, Great job!
Oh yeah, details, details, they make everything lol
A short film about a park bench
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