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Well, finally its here, my first real and good animation (With an original story)
It's about a Green Knight and... i really dont know... Just see the animation! :)
Hope you like it!
The background music is called COH - Royal Cave Castle
http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/473261... (Nicksmall94)
Nice use of the camera pan and shake for extra effect, but I think it was overdone a little bit. The character design was pretty good, and I liked the way you handled your fights...a lot more paced out, more wear and tear on the armor and weaponry as he advances, and quick battle moves that makes or breaks you. Nice experimentation, and would like to see more from you!
you get better at animating everytime :)
a lot better then that other stuff out there. It feels like a excercize in flash.
But it does need a lot of work to get it....right.
not using bodies is a art choice but i got confused what happend sometimes. not a good thing.
the drawing of the green's helmet (which is awesome!) is a good indication that you can and schould do a lot better.
ANy way thanls for sharing i liked it nonetheless
Thanks! I know that not using bodies is extrange at the eyes, but is an easy style of animation... In this animation, i move 4 parts of the body per frame, and in another animation that i published, i meved 7 parts... and is very, but very hard...
Its not bad, though it seems low quality, and you could have uploaded a bigger file to provide a better quality sound and picture. My song sorta fits in at some points, It would have fit in better if the animation was slighty faster. Its still a nice job, and fun to watch, though I'd appreciate it if you put my song in the credits on the side. Newgrounds will remove your video for not crediting me for the song. Keep up the good work c:
Thanks! lol, the first time i edited the animation, i put your song as the song, but i forgotted to put "add"
(sorry my english is horrrible)
It's definately original allright. Rather short and no backstory really. All that were told is that Green is told to surrender to the Grey for some reason. It's rather confusing that the first Grey guy calls the Green guy Sir and waking him up. I've never known an assasin to announce he's going to kill you before he does it. It's pretty good animation but very hard to follow if they have no boides. Also, don't keep the guys axe black all the time. If you want it shadowed, turn dwn the brightness of the colours on it or it's just silly.
Thanks for the critic! I know that has not backstory really. i wanted to do a killing spree, or something like that... and thanks... thanks for the advice about the axe. good idea.
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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