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I KNOW the title is spelled incorrectly. There isn't a way to change the submission title D:
At least not since the update. I'll fix it when I can.
Here it is, finally. I've been working on this for weeks.
It's my first animation using skeletons, and it took FOREVER.
I'm really happy with how it came out.
I'd love some feedback!
As people have said before, you do show a lot of inspiration from Egoraptor/Oney/Spazkid, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. You put in the work here and it definitely shows, and it definitely made me laugh (Especially the "NOPE" part, haha). I would say continue working on technical things like anatomy.
Looking at some of your previous stuff, you've got a great style in the works, so try to focus more on that. You could put out some great content, just try to be a tad more original and add your own spice to your next toon, which I eagerly await! :D
It's clearly is based off egoraptor's style, but who cares, you pulled it off and it made me laugh. The only critique I'd give is maybe work on your anatomy a little bit. That sounds wrong. But anyway, keep it up you sexy devil ;)
Welp. Been there done that. And it's not even the pseudo-anime/rage comic/crappy flash art style that we've all seen before. It's the writing, which is stale, and boring, and honestly just tries to hard. These aren't funny anymore, I didn't laugh at it.
Except for the sawing the head off bit, that was fucking funny.
All I can say is just be original. Try and do something new instead of copying egoraptor ;)
Im getting tired of all the same artwork for parodies..really.
It all follows the same thing...big facial expressions...stupid poses...hysterical laughs/shouts.
The originality is going down nowadays.All parodies now are the "stupid humour".No more smart puns or jokes.
And people,please,stop taking egoraptor as the ONLY reference for game parodies.He isnt the pioneer on that ground.
This was hilarious. I laughed so hard at this pointless humor.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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