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I KNOW the title is spelled incorrectly. There isn't a way to change the submission title D:
At least not since the update. I'll fix it when I can.
Here it is, finally. I've been working on this for weeks.
It's my first animation using skeletons, and it took FOREVER.
I'm really happy with how it came out.
I'd love some feedback!
Now, the writing could have been something more than, "OMG!! WHAT'S THAT?!"
It did make fun of the entire story of the game or at least summarize it in a nutshell. But I felt that not much wasn't made fun of in the game at all. You could have made fun of other aspects rather than the story and whatnot. I mean, don't flat out point out the obvious, but try and do something like reference the situation in a clever manner. Also, the voice acting didn't help that much. I think you could hire some voice actors to make it more interesting to listen to.
The animation was alright. I mean, this is probably your first time using f-b-f animation. But I think you went a little overboard on the oney and possible egoraptor and spazkid style of animation. I mean I could tell a bit in the way it was animated. Try using a little less tweening as it didn't make it any better.
The music could have been something OTHER than the Ren and Stimpy music. It really didn't fit what you were making fun of. I mean, you could have pulled a Left4Speed 1/2 and not use music to set the mood. I mean, the silence did help some scenes of the movie.
Funny movie, never played the game but it caught my interest now. Ok now ive got to say this because it bugs the shit out of me when I see it. Thecatofnimes comment, saying its other peoples style, your fucking retarded. Seriously, there are only so many ways you can draw shit, and however people draw is THEIR style. The only way that even makes sense about saying its another persons style is if they frickin traced it. Anyway, good job thanks for the upload lol on mispelling title and trolls gonna troll.
At the start I was like "Th!5 15 EGORATOR WRITTEN ALL OVER IT"
then as it progressed I thought it looked incredibly familar to ONEY's style. Still a really good animation and very true to the story of the game XD.
There were times when i thought the animation didn't suit the parts of the game. I'd love to see you branch off from this and work on your own style of animation.
Was pretty good, the title is good we all know its a parody so don't worry :)
haha xD aw man... LOL! it was kind of awesome x) well it was good :3 bit really wierd when that zombie or monster or whatever was jerking off x) but the video was cool ;) keep it up!
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