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I KNOW the title is spelled incorrectly. There isn't a way to change the submission title D:
At least not since the update. I'll fix it when I can.
Here it is, finally. I've been working on this for weeks.
It's my first animation using skeletons, and it took FOREVER.
I'm really happy with how it came out.
I'd love some feedback!
Cool stuff, you got the key moments in an indie game, and the animations were great. I didnt laugh out loud though, but I'm not sure what I could suggest to help that.
This is awesomeeeeeeeeeee!
I fell from my chair laughing, watching all those epic facial expressions!
But: I don't know anything about a game!
I loved it! I never played the game but have heard enough to know about it and I just loved this. I especially like the "nope..nooope..nope water bad." lol
Now, the writing could have been something more than, "OMG!! WHAT'S THAT?!"
It did make fun of the entire story of the game or at least summarize it in a nutshell. But I felt that not much wasn't made fun of in the game at all. You could have made fun of other aspects rather than the story and whatnot. I mean, don't flat out point out the obvious, but try and do something like reference the situation in a clever manner. Also, the voice acting didn't help that much. I think you could hire some voice actors to make it more interesting to listen to.
The animation was alright. I mean, this is probably your first time using f-b-f animation. But I think you went a little overboard on the oney and possible egoraptor and spazkid style of animation. I mean I could tell a bit in the way it was animated. Try using a little less tweening as it didn't make it any better.
The music could have been something OTHER than the Ren and Stimpy music. It really didn't fit what you were making fun of. I mean, you could have pulled a Left4Speed 1/2 and not use music to set the mood. I mean, the silence did help some scenes of the movie.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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