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Bowser's new plan includes, among other things, explode Mario and Luigi.
But he needed some professional help to made them fly away.
That's the First Episode of this Crossover between The Mario Bros and The Bombermen.
I hope that you like it! =)
@raygun586: Because you can press play for first scene.
why won't it let me pick the 1st scene
Luigi got pissed...
not too bad. You have a pretty cool idea. You seem to have a problem with the flash pausing I keep having to right click and play twice before it will start again. Some parts are just slow to transition.
The biggest problem is that you just jump everything a little too fast. for example, you started during a battle that we knew nothing about. then after the battle the plot just advances too fast, they go from being enemies to being allies without any explanation between the two. Bomberman just hears rescue princess and assumes that they're the good guys. Most people wouldn't assume that right off the bat. Try to slow the plot a bit and build things up. A little extra dialogue won't kill people.
Next, you need a preloader. That may have been part of my problem when I said the movie kept pausing. That are very easy to put in and you can download them from the download section. It makes things easier so we know it's actually loading and not a white screen for however long that we think there's something wrong with the flash or our internet window. Also, assuming that green thunder message was your author logo, you need to make it more obvious, when it came up, I lost it and it got stuck on that screen until I hit play on my right click twice like I mentioned above. For a minute, I thought that WAS the flash.
Try to work on your battles a bit. It may be nice to see more than just a lazy rpg battle
Anyway, I look forward to see where this is going. Fix the stuff I mentioned, and you could have an awesome series.
Thanks for the hints, I put now the preloader.
and the RPG battle is a Paper Mario Battle, the next battle will be diferent.
THIS IS EPIC :D NICE SKILLS IN MAKEING THIS :D I HOPE IT GETS ADCEPTED INTO THE NG COMMUTIY AND IT BECOMES TEH SERIS IT SHOULD BE :D
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