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Aug 2, 2002 | 7:14 AM EDT

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10 things to do while shopping with your girlfriend

***Fixed***
8/2/02 1. Another Font Put In
8/4/02 1. Mouths Made Move
8/4/02 2. Another Music Added
8/4/02 3. The prealoader i forgot added

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TriumvirateTriumvirate

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Animation

is not about movement
its about life!!!! its about acting!!
It doesnt matter if its a cat, a man, or a limbless gray dude who uses a gun and a sword to fight a clown with magical powers and shit, its still important that you focus on the PERFORMANCE.
animation means giving anima, a soul, a personality, to our characters, and then use our drawing to give that performance. A performance that our audience will believe and enjoy so much that they will actually believe we are seeing living characters, and forget theyre just drawings. And the only way to translate this "life" into our animation, is by the use and knowledge of 2 concepts: "weight" and "force".
when a sword contacts a heavy object like the clowns staff moving moving at a relativelly fast speed. it does not magically create a random splat of filtered "light" over it. then magically teleport nearby.
When a character does a "BIG JUMP" and lands on the ground he doesnt just contact the floor like a ballerina, with a controlled and stiff recoil.
STOP LYING
STOP LYING TO YOURSELF AS AN ANIMATOR
STOP LYING TO THE AUDIENCE
STOP TRYING TO CONVINCE ME THAT THIS IS HOW THINGS LOOK
STOP PRETENDING THAT BULLETS COME OUT OF GRAY RECTANGLES WITH NO RESEMBLANCE OF A REAL GUN
THERE IS a reason why animators take so much time drawing and practicing poses and acting out their animations. its because this way they can give out a performance that feels real no matter how insane the fantasy world they want us to believe in is.
This is precissely the thing I dont like about all of your animations so far. they are too damn focused on style over substance, they are not believable. this isnt necessarily a bad thing but your style is not based on any sort of real action. its a charicature of other cartoons you have seen. youre trying to imitate life from other imitations of life. And it honestly looks like crap.

LOOK AT THE REAL WORLD
GO OUT
ACT OUT YOUR ANIMATION
STOP TRYING TO TELL ME THAT LIGHT BOUNCES MAGICALLY OVER SWORDS AND GLASSES BECAUSE I LIVE IN PLANET EARTH AND I KNOW LIGHT DOESNT WORK LIKE THIS

An animator can take a lot of liberties with fast action (but I do think you were more reserved with fast action this time than usual, and im pretty sure you are aware that your slower motions are lacking, probably because you are suffering burnout for doing too much fast action) but still, try to keep an eye on your masses instead of just randomly drawing them because you think you can away with it because "the action is fast"

all that being said

for the love of god arent you bored of this????
every single one of your cartoons looks and plays exactly the same
its the same "no storyline" scenes with boring ass characters, uninteresting poses and overall a bad presentation. They look rushed. and the pencil tool aint helpin either.
if you tried to put up a demo reel out of all the cartoons youve done you would realize you have abused and exhausted every trick in your hat.

The only good thing I can say of about this is that it at least tells a story. yeah hank kills the clown with a weird mutant arm woo! some of your effects with filters actually look decent when used in lasers. but ive seen you use filters to accentuate how light bounces in certain objects before. Dont do that.

Do yourself a big favor: get a sketchbook and draw stuff you see in your life.
draw draw draw until your eyeballs fall down and then draw some more!
this anime shit is not going to help you out if you want to reach out for a serious carreer in animation.

this..".anime"... is your cartoon rabbit formula

"...this formula for drawing cartoon rabbits payed off, so in the end he couldnt change the tragic habits this cartoon rabbits formula made"

good luck

p.s. and this has nothing to do with your bad animation/drawing/filmaking habits. quit making shitty cartoons every time you can get some money out of it from a newgrounds holiday.
I suspect thats the only reason you make cartoons at all.



KWAS71KCKKWAS71KCK

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

meh

average, all i can say is it was average.



wolffaulknerwolffaulkner

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

i was a litte funny

some were funny some were not, but it was better than what i could do so...



freehodefreehode

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

As a animator myself...

The animation is fluid and impressive, and the pace is good. The only thing I would fix is the text is somewhat bland. Maybe add a little more color too.

Overall, a solid effort.

Cool beans.



GentleSherpaGentleSherpa

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well... It was amusing

As an animator, and a creative mind, you did well. But it seems to me that this would have been alot better if you hadnt used (almost directly, i might add) the style made 'famous' by kirkflip in his Bad Inventions series. Your sticks looked almost exactly the same, minus the slick animation. The concept was funny, but again, it wasnt really something you came up with, only something you took and ran with. Which is fine, however something in me would really love to see some origional work from you. Also it did go a bit too fast in parts, losing the timing of the joke. All in all you get a 3, because while i liked it, i would feel bad giving you total credit.


NoLifeAnimations responds:

Your right, i could of have done this much better, i like using this characters, and i always use them, the sound could not of been as annoying, i could of have this more frame by frame, i could of have the mouths move, i could of done many many things better