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This is an advertisement I did for my schools news network. It came out really well. Hope you like it.
Please note that I made this in less than a week.
Original audio done by Julian Smith
The only thing you did for this video was the animation. The voices and acting is from a youtube video. Seems like you should probably put that in the description.
Hot Kool-Aid is just terrible XD
for something done in less then a week i found this pretty funny
I don't think it matters how long it took to make, but the quality. I've already seen a video with this exact audio on YouTube and what you did was make an animation for the audio. The animation was smooth enough but try something original next time.
You know nothing of animation.
The art/animation is where I feel you need the most work. The movements aren't particularly well executed and the lack of compelling directing leaves much to be desired. From the start, I figured the writing and acting would follow suit, but I was wrong. This is actually a very funny cartoon with a silly premise and fortunately it doesn't go on any longer than it needed to. The audio quality was pretty bad and the acting (while passable) needs work.
A solid effort to be sure and as you develop as an artist and acquire better sound equipment, you'll definitely become a force to be reckoned with. Keep an eye on this guy, Newgrounds. "TiredPreston" is definitely one to watch.
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