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This is my second animation.
Well, It´s not perfect, but it´s funny.
To be honest, it is not really that funny. The art is decent, but I just expected there to be a better punchline. For example, imagine, when the dog is sneezed off the man's face, that the dog would either be complaining about being on the man's chin for years without a proper grooming, or be almost to the point of starvation desperately craving less than edible food. You have potential...I am just not seeing it in this work.
its alot better than your previous work but its still not perfect. im kinda mixed so you get the middle score
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