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Short animation i made for this Valentine's, not the first animation, just the first uploaded to Newgrounds. Anyway, it is the first animation with Lip Sync.
Thanks to Msevaamore for let me use "Autumn leaves", a great song.
the animation was alright and the running joke was good however the still a better love story than twilight ruined itt for me.
Got it. It will be better for the next one. Thanks.
Not bad, I think if you executed the pun of the joke better this would have done more than just a slight chuckle. Next time I recommend the "show don't tell" method. For example, instead of just saying the romance is better than Twilight, you could have Edward looking at them awkwardly crying and then saying that This was better than Twilight. You can probably come up with a better way than I just explained but I just wanted to illustrate my point. Good luck on your next one!
Thanks mate !
Animation good, sound good, Story: way to short
Yeah, i know it's too short... But isn't the most important... I mean 1 star ? Duration is not the center of the animation. Anyway, it's true that is too short...
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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