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It may not be gold but pretty good for my first animation, being a noob with no experience. My own stuff will be much better when I get to making it. Don't hate too hard
Ah... not bad for a first. Work on the backgrounds and your sound a little and it would be worth a 4. Some funny dialog would of got a 5. Good work all the same.
pretty good 4 ur first animation.
make it less noisy next time
Needs a preloader and it loops plus looks a little choppy and lazy in places, but for you're first animation this is increadibly imprressive. If you keep up this standard of work and continue to improve you could be great.
Severely lacking, it's nice that it's your information, but it more belongs to beginner animators forums rather than newgrounds, brush up your skills and try again.
First of all, the design wasn't bad, goku and vegeta were pretty well drawn, although in such cases as the explosion being visible from space could use more work.
The animation was really lacking here, the way goku son was smashed by vegeta was poorly made, there were multiple other cases where animation needed work.
The story, well, there's none as far as I can see, it's just vegeta randomly popping out and smashing goku.
Sound effects weren't all that bad, although vegeta nor goku making any sounds at all was a bit lazy.
The camera work wasn't bad, it was fitting.
Overall, I'd say this movie should be more of left for personal use rather than a video you'd want to submit.
As a final note, all I have to say is to practice, practice and one more time, practice! Creating ANY artwork should be passionate and you should attempt to create art that would resemble your visions as closely as possible.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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