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EDIT 3: Yowza! I can't believe how well this was received! ;_; thanks, you guys. <3 Here's to much more!
EDIT 2: This is just a character introduction, guys!
EDIT: Hooray for frontpage! Thanks so much!
Thanks to everyone who provided the nice feedback! You're all too kind!
Happy early Valentine's Day, Newgrounds!
This is the beginning of something special.
Featuring animation and writing by me (nalem), and voice acting from Lefthandedsock, Rina-chan, and Kirbopher!
This has been a long time coming, many thanks to everyone who loan a hand in this! It is sincerely appreciated.
Enjoy yourselves and have a good one!
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I've had all three of those things happen to me... but not all at once. Cute, sexy and fun: trademarks of nalem's work. Excellent supporting cast and effort by all. The theme and subject matter might be cliche, but I find it's been reinvented here. These are going to be sweet!
Now THAT'S bad luck! xD
I actually found this to be a good quality animation. You've got a good partial-anime drawing style and the animation itself isn't bad either; pretty smooth in fact. Your voice actors are excellent and backgrounds are decent. Everything is pretty solid in fact.
Now other people seem to hate on your concept, how its too "cliche." I admit this kind of scene has been done before, but it does take some skill to actually replicate things too. I recommend mixing more original content in future episodes, stuff that only the author would come up with. It could be a change in the script for example. However, you've got a good series coming along and I look forward to seeing more!
you put rina chan in it
you didn't take rina chan OUT of it
NOT HIRING ANY DECENT VOICE ACTORS
As the creator of this cartoon, I will admit while this movie is quite imperfect, I made absolutely no mistakes with the voice casting. Noah, Rina-chan, and Kirb provided solid performances and I am deeply honored to have worked with them.
nice animation but the story could be less cliche
A short film about a park bench
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