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EDIT 3: Yowza! I can't believe how well this was received! ;_; thanks, you guys.
EDIT 2: This is just a character introduction, guys!
EDIT: Hooray for frontpage! Thanks so much!
Thanks to everyone who provided the nice feedback! You're all too kind!
Happy early Valentine's Day, Newgrounds!
This is the beginning of something special.
Featuring animation and writing by me (nalem), and voice acting from Lefthandedsock, Rina-chan, and Kirbopher!
This has been a long time coming, many thanks to everyone who loan a hand in this! It is sincerely appreciated.
Enjoy yourselves and have a good one!
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That was some funny stuff dude. LOL
I always loved your vids.
Alright well I think it was better than I expected but... I dunno, something about the animation just wasn't appealing to me. I like how it's frame-by-frame, it's done alright, but at some parts it just looks kinda disjointed and choppy. Coloring was a bit sludgy-looking.
As for art, it just looks like anime.
For writing and plot and such, it just didn't do it for me, I dunno, it just seemed very flat and generic. Was very predictable and I didn't find it funny.
As far as voicing goes, it was okay, I've seen worse, but at parts it seemed off, like it didn't match with the animation. When she was screaming at the end, she seemed to be acting more than the character was actually moving around, it looked kinda weird how she was sorta just standing still and fidgeting a bit when yelling. Quality of the mics seemed to sort've switch around a lot, too.
Overall, I didn't really like it too much, but I have seen worse, I'll just leave it at that.
Health Reminder 3: The Unfixable Thought Machine
This is oil story... The real trend of the world. How Tuk uses oil to solve his problems?
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