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Something i have been working on :D, part 2 will come if this would be succesful :D!
https://twitter.com/#!/Ev en572 :D
You put very little effort in this, i dont know why anyone would want to show how bad they are at this kind of thing put some effort in this or dont do it at all. Go read a book instead u dont deserve any positive recognition on this nor will u recieve it.
Anyone that rates this is either on drugs or hasnt gone through puberty yet.
Sorry, im just very new here, i have been animation for like only some weeks when that came out.
Just awful... Seriously? So many things wrong with this video, would it have killed you to make the arrow shaft straight?
Hey, I can tell you put effort into it, and I like that. Keep working, keep practicing. You might want to hone your fluidity, character movements should be smoooooooth. Other than that, keep up the great work!
ps, more sound effects would be cool too
Thanks for your constructive review :D I appriciate that
I will be honest the whole joke of an arrow to the knee is very old. Seems as tho the animation was rushed quite a bit in this case and there was no structure involved. If you were to improve on these and the sound as well you would have a nice 10 star rating from me. Good for a first attempt keep trying tho.
Thanks for the constructive review :D :D
it's ok... But you need to make it longer... maybe some attk jokes... like a huge text saying " I used to be an adventurer..." at the end, and a soldier (or whatever) face
Hmmm, ill try..
A short film about a park bench
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