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Lazy Writing 4

rated 4.20 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Feb 8, 2012 | 6:37 PM EST

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Warning: this animation is silly.
Improvised with love.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It was weird comedy ive never really seen an animation like it and maybe i should watch the previous versions to understand the humor more. Though it was refreshing i thought it was also a little dry. I also got confused at one point as both the male characters sound the same for a second i thought couch man(for the sake of distinguishing the two) was narrating the show and playing along then i realized they were extremely similar. Anyway that was my only real problem.

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LazyMuffin responds:

Yeah, the Announcer voice is sort of confusing in retrospect, I think you can tell I'm sort of tired when I recorded it. It's not an excuse though. Thanks.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Well, this was much shorter than usual, but still retaining the lazy feel that you're aiming for. This is one of those flash animations that make me have trouble telling if it needs more or less than what it already shows. I don't mean that it's balanced and the perfect flash, but just generally hard to talk about without going into every little detail, which isn't the general aim for this flash. It's just a flash that doesn't need to be explained, just shown for pure enjoyment. Just throw your brain out the window and enjoy it.

Overall, this is a pretty good flash, just very different from what I would normally expect. It goes through pretty quickly, and the first time I watched it I didn't understand it entirely, but that just the idea of most of your animations.

-Powerdude964, OUT!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Its decent, but the act is getting dull pretty quick. I want to see boobs, explosions, and motorcycle chases.

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LazyMuffin responds:

Well that's just your ADD talking. Thanks.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Lazy writing makes for lazy animating makes for a lazy review...
If it was funny at least =/