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It's my 1st time doing this things. It's not the best that you can find, but I tried my best this time.
great song, prolly could use a little more to the game, but good job otherwise ha
Needs a bit of more choices to wear and needs a brush and clean.
For instance put a song selection on.
Have another try and hit the nail on the head.
OK, it does work and it has music. It is a dressup, but no...
Its very basic, with so little options and interest that it holds no interest to me. The black garment with red stripe looks quite good but thats it.
Only dressups with a fair few options, preferably with some animation, maybe background options and better art than this would get over a 1 from me.
Its a start.
You Forgot a Space Between "My" and "1st"
Where the heck does that grey thing go? I couldn't fit it anywhere. Hairy panties? Around the mouth? Is she a robber? Aside from her looking like the Pilsburry Dough Boy, she looks incomplete. I know you did a lot of work on the hair probably but notice it doesn't have an outline and her body does? Her body is kinda lopsided and legs off center. There's also no shading. The stage doesn't fit the background and you have white bars on the top and bottom. You might scoff at these little things and 'say who cares?' but subtle things like these make all the difference in quality.
I know it's your first, but that's why I'm giving you pointers in the things I did. Simple basics.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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