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This pilot is really good at what he does.
I agree with him. VVVVVVVVVVVVVV but you also really do need to learn to put in a title screen or loading screen. plus I under stand this is a cartoon but cmon. an inch worm from a plane? no matter how high that plane is ur not gonna see an inch worm.
inch worms can't talk either
I wanna say you have continuity issues. That's where a scene(or some form of it) doesn't match the scene before it. Like something disappears then reappears again in the next scene.
But the issue in this video is this, when the pilot says "hey an inch worm" he nose dives to the runway, and you see the plane in the next scene flying parallel with the runway.
Then after that the inch worm goes "holy smokes" and then the plane nose dives again. How can it do that when it already was flying parallel with(and almost touching) the runway? Now that should cause the plane to go straight into the ground, but no it doesn't. Instead you have it flying parallel with the runway again.
It's just a simple oversight on your part, that's all really. Hell, never thought I'd say a flash movie has a continuity issue. I mean that's something you'd see done in a bad B rated horror movie, not a flash movie. lol
Nevertheless kid, it's was actually a pretty good video.
There is so much to like about this movie, the dubbing was tight and some of the perspective and things were perfect, but 'association' is misspelled in the opening. It's like a pube on a beautiful wedding cake.
Dang it! I can't spell! D:
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