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Feb 3, 2012 | 5:16 PM EST

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Hey all,
I'm really excited at this is my first submission...even though it is just a preview of a larger work!
The main storyline will be that a spawn of chaos has awakened deep below some ruins in a forest. As he destroys the forest, the creature of balance comes to try and seal him away. Who will succeed? I have yet to decide! :P

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CaptainDynamite96CaptainDynamite96

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars February 3, 2012

Has potential, needs polish

This is a good effort for a first submission, but for the full project I do have a few recommendations. My main criticism is that the images do require some clean up, as there are points where you can see lines that probably shouldn't be there. Also, I would advise to add some motion to the backgrounds, compared to the animations of the characters, the backgrounds seem dull. However, there is a lot of potential here. You seem comfortable with the program you used to draw, and the sound effects were quite good. Again, all that you need a bit of polish and the full product will easily be something I'd look forward to.


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Trey5169Trey5169

Rated 1 / 5 stars February 3, 2012

sad

It's got good potential, but if the animation isn't steeped up in the full movie/game, then it may as well be worthless.
At the moment, this looks like something I could create in my sleep, assuming I didn't have to create the soundtrack.



xkore2xkore2

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars February 3, 2012

Not bad...

But very short for the portal, sorry.


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