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Imashi

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rated 3.31 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Adventure - Other
Tags:
visual
strange
book
novel

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Uploaded
Feb 2, 2012 | 8:09 PM EST

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Author Comments

A strange story about a bunny-like star that has a strange dream.

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This is a visual novel so, if you do not like reading, close this now, please. Elseways, this is a short story I wrote a long time ago and, following the success of my other visual novel 416, I decided to give it a try.
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Anyway, bla bla bla, I hope you like (and understand) it.

Thank you!

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Edit: I had forgotten to enable the loader in the game. It's now fixed, sorry for any inconveniences!

Reviews


teddybowtiesteddybowties

Rated 4 / 5 stars

nice, very archetypal. But the grammar... eek. Are you a native speaker? you need a bit of help with English Composition, k? ;)


Nittram responds:

In my defense, I was 14 and I'm not a native speaker ahahaha, but thank you anyway :3


omurahomurah

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Why people say it's long ?
5mn is not long.
well, i also enjoyed the paradox concept. Still, i didn't fully understand the ending -that's why i gave it 4 instead of 5



mrpeaceisheremrpeaceishere

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

So i would assume the cycle of Imashi waking up and releasing the Evil Imashi?


Nittram responds:

Yup n.n


itsthelenchoitsthelencho

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I love the music! Did you write it?


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Nittram responds:

Yes, I wrote everything. Thanks! :D


DomomoDomomo

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

It had a pretty fascinating plot and story. The story was a bit long and the dialogue appeared a bit too slow after each, I'm assuming, "paragraphs". And I especially enjoyed the paradox and the music. The music fit really well. I realize that this is kindof random, but if you did continue the story, would it be the same "ending" since the "new" Imashi had not changed, and the world had already changed. I don't know, just curious. But all in all, a nice story that wasn't really predictable.


Nittram responds:

The idea of the plot was that it was a paradox, yes. n.n